Category: Writers Block
I want someone to be my silence,
I want someone to be my pill.
hush the noise deep inside me. make the pain lie perfectly still.
Chase away all of the demons, so i can be perfect again.
Define perfection?... there is no such thing
Hmm perhaps it is not attainable again but it does exist. Back when life hadn't touched us and innocence ran rampant. When an owwie was made better by a kiss and a band aide cured all.
hey. I like this piece of writing. very powerful.
Karrie
Even then prefection didn't exist it never has and why do people need to achieve perfection, isn't it enough just to be you and to be able to get on with life..
Goblin, you who criticises everyone for not being perfect according to your idea of perfection now talks about "it being enough for soeone to be themselves and able to go on with life?" How arrogant of you! Star
For me a baby is perfect. they have no faults or cares. No the world around it may not be. It doesn't make the baby any less perfect. Anyway thank you for your opinion and every ones they are always welcome.
Ok I kind of got lost in explaining what perfection ment and didn't explain why I wrote it that way. Part of what I said above is true for me but what it realy is about is. I started doing foster care wile I wait to adopt and I have 3 little kids in my home. I just started doing this a few months back and it seems the kids I got are very little and horribly abused. 1, 2, & a 3 year old. 2 worse than the other but still bad no matter how you look at it. I wrote this after the 2 year old who has had 3 brain operations grabbed my hand and said stop hurt (in spanish). So what I ment by perfection was I wish I could stop all his pain and make it perfect for him, for all of them really. anyhow thanks I just thought I should clear that up so you were not thinking that I ment people need to be perfect or should have no flaws.